Hi Christy,

Your site would be fantastic as a final the way it is now. The one thing I noticed is that when referencing your services, the word "suite" was used instead of "suit". It is eye-catching but not cluttered. This will help me in working on my site.

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Elvia Abdussamadi
PROVA Administrative Services

Hi Christy,

My first thought is WOW, just like all the replies I have read so far. One thing I noticed on the 'About Us' page is that is says "pain-stacking" near the bottom and I believe it should be "pain-staking".

Great job! Definitely an inspiration.

Hi Christy,

I think you've done really great work here. It's clean and professional. Overall, I hope I do as well in building my website.

Have you verified the code at The W3 Markup Validation Service? It's a great help in finding problems, like the broken Home Page link, before you publish a site.

In addition to what others have posted, I offer a few edits on the content:

• Home Page:
  • paragraph 1: If you're asking yourself, "How will I ever complete this before the deadline?", we are here to put it all in perspective. Would someone please verify that the comma comes after the close quote?
  • paragraph 3: If you offset your list with a colon, then your list items need to be separated by semi-colons
  • paragraph 4: VA's should be VAs
  • paragraph 5: To find out how we may assist you, please fill out...
• Services Page:
  • is the body text font change from the Home Page to the About Us page deliberate? It's one of those little details that "jars" the eye, so you might want to keep it consistent.
  • paragraph 1: VA's should be VAs
  • paragraph 2: pain-stacking should be pains-taking
  • in IE (Windows Vista), "By the hour..." is not centred within the underline style that offsets it; it also overlaps the bottom of "Types of Assistance" - don't know if others are seeing it the same way?
• RFP Page - what a great idea!:
  • paragraph one needs a comma after "action" and it looks like there are two spaces between "packet" and "within"
  • I'm wondering about non-U.S. potential clients vis. the address fields
  • perhaps you could add a field for time zones, so that you know at a glance if this might be a client service consideration

Again, my nit-picky eye notwithstanding, I think you've done an excellent job. Well done!

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Your Administrative Asset,
Daniela Chase

Christy,

The website looks great. It has a nice clean appearance. The only cosmetic item you may want to revise is the color of your logo.

The green words "Envision Virtual Assistant Services" is a little difficult to read against the blue sky background. The purple and yellow V's stand out just fine, but the green print for the company name is difficult to read.

On a more positive note, I love your tag line - Welcome to the Future of Service.

Best of Luck,
Julie

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Julie | Virtual Resource Services, Inc (VRSI)
http://www.vrsioffice.com

Really like your site, Christy. (No tables for layout, which is a pet peeve of mine with site builders. :

I'll give a more in depth critique later, but wanted to jump in on the "pain-staking, pains-taking, etc." bandwagon real quick. It is actually painstaking. One word.

I'm with AssetVirtual, and I would run your page URLs through http://validator.w3.org/ to help find errors on your site so you can correct them.

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Jules, SunRise Virtual Solutions - WordPress Customization & XHTML/CSS Web Sites

You all are awesome, thank you for keen eye for detail. Daniela, great review. You aren't nit-pickey.

Your time is greatly appreciated

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Christy Byrd :daisy:
Envision Virtual Assistant Service

I like that it's crisp, clean and allows easy access to information. However, I think it could be made a bit more professional looking.