Hey all,

I just finished the first draft of my website, please have at it and let me know what you think. Be as blunt as possible just please don't make me cry. Just kidding, I promise I won't cry.

www.envisionvas.com

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Christy Byrd :daisy:
Envision Virtual Assistant Service

Wow! What a great draft for a website. I can't wait to do my own.
Thanks for the inspiration!

Good luck!
-Ro

Site looks good! Broken link back to home page but the rest are fine, it's clean & not overloaded. When I clicked the twitter & facebook symbols I expected to be taken to your facebook & twitter profiles rather than being given the option to share your website with my own twitter & facebook friends.

It looks very professional Christy, I like it x

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Pauline Cox - Virtual Assistant Liverpool, UK
Virtually The Same

I too thought that the Facebook and Twitter link would take me to your pages and I believe they should so we can learn more about you.

I saw one spelling error, "... to suite most any business needs." The would be be 'suit'.

I particularly like the idea of an RFP on your page. Nicely done.

The tab to the Home page doesn't seem to work.

I like it very much. You have done a nice job!

Janine

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Thank you both for taking the time out to comment.

Pauline, I will make the adjustments immediately.

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Christy Byrd :daisy:
Envision Virtual Assistant Service

Thank you so much Janine, I will get on the corrections immediately. I will have to figure out what's the problem with the facebook and twitter link.

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Christy Byrd :daisy:
Envision Virtual Assistant Service

Hi Christy:

Your site is awesome! I love it and, honestly, would not change anything except for the minor items listed in the previous posts.

Way to go!

Jolene

Looks good, but I would make a few changes. 1) Your links, I would line them up with where you have that line (under the titles). and maybe move your facebook and twitter links somewhere else? maybe to the bottom middle? they seem out of place. 2) Your home page link does not work (as mentioned prev). 3) On your services page, "For a detailed...." it isn't lined up properly, it overlaps with your footer. Also, your content on that page covers the line under "Types of Assistance". Hope this helps

Home page, 3rd paragraph: With training and skill in; should be skills and a :
RFP page: I submitted a test form. The only change I would recommend is to have the same font for each completion box. Also, do you want to consider building a "success" page for when the RFP is submitted?
Navigation buttons: It is standard to have the same navigation menu for each page. The site appears to drop certain buttons as you move from one page to another.
Do you want a favicon?
In terms of increased page ranking, you might want to consider adding your business name to the title of each page or a keyword.
Is the bottom photo you? If so, I would use that only; making the site more personal.

The copy is well-written. Do you write it? If so, you have a good grasp of writing.

Hope these recommendations help. Let us know if you get any hits.
Trish

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Trish Hallmark
www.thvaonline.com

Hi Christy,

I was also going to tell you about the semicolon and then realised Trish had already pointed it out to you...

Site looks great. Good luck with it.


Bianca.