Sue,
Congratulations on putting up your website - that's a big step

I do have some suggestions:
The home page needs some tweaking - at first I didn't realize there was more towards the bottom (the part with your photo and "What is a Virtual assistant" is hidden from the screen at first glance - perhaps bring that information up towards the top). You definately need your company name more prominent - at least towards the top, perhaps in a more bold font. The "page 2" label needs to change too.
When I clicked on "Clients" I was also expecting to see testimonials or a list of clients. Perhaps change it to "contact us".
Also, I was looking for information about you & your company in particular. Perhaps add a "About Us" tab or section? Say what is special about your company (otherwise, it will seem kind of generic).
Good luck to you!!!
Rachel