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#1 (permalink)   02-23-2010 rsavard New Member Company name: Savvy Executive Solutions   Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Riyadh, Saudi Arabia Posts: 11 Construction Criticism Please! I have started a VA business in Saudi Arabia catering to executives who need help with communications and organization. Any comments would be welcome! www.savvyexecutivesolutions.com Thanks! Rebecca

#2 (permalink)   02-23-2010 OrganizedAssistant Contributing Member Company name: Organized Assistant From the Desk of Janet Barclay: January 2012 in Review My latest Twitter: Overcoming Secret Blogging Fears: If I Give Away M...   Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Hamilton, Ontario, Canada Posts: 156 Blog Entries: 7 Re: Construction Criticism Please! Nice site, Rebecca - easy to navigate, read, and understand, with just enough images to give it visual appeal. For some reason, the word "Contact" in the menu drops to a second line on every page except "Retain" - if you can figure out what you did differently on that page, you can hopefully change the others to match. Good luck with your new business! __________________ Janet Barclay, MVA, Organized Assistant Founder & Director, Golden Horseshoe Virtual Assistants Group

#3 (permalink)   02-23-2010 amylynn Contributing Member Company name: Porter Office Solutions   Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 206 Re: Construction Criticism Please! Nice site. It is to the point and very clean looking. Good luck with your business!! __________________ Amy www.porterofficesolutions.com

#4 (permalink)   02-23-2010 vrsi-office Contributing Member Company name: Virtual Resource Services, Inc. My latest Twitter: I just added my Jabber account into @digsby! http:...   Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Arizona Posts: 176 Re: Construction Criticism Please! Very professional site. Clean, easy to read, and easy to navigate. Best of Luck, Julie __________________ Julie | Virtual Resource Services, Inc (VRSI) http://www.vrsioffice.com

#5 (permalink)   02-23-2010 Essential Office Solutions Junior Member Company name: Essential Office Solutions Our Newest Blog: Motivation My latest Twitter: Gray overcast day here - but it's been a very...   Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Illinois Posts: 411 Blog Entries: 2 Re: Construction Criticism Please! Your look is very clean and professional and flows nicely. I would suggest that you add text to home page -- this page is your opening where your visitor will want to know immediately what you are about/what can you do for them. The second paragraph on your Services page could be that text. Draw them in - tell them why they need your services. Great job and good luck with your business. __________________ Cindy www.eoseasy.comThe Chrysalis Plan

#6 (permalink)   02-23-2010 dognose Active Member Company name: Laserdog Productions   Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Lafayette, CO Posts: 834 Re: Construction Criticism Please! Hi Rebecca, You have a clean looking, professional site. I agree with the comment above about adding more to your home page. Also, I find the text a bit difficult to read. On your FAQ page, you have headings that are bolded & that text is much easier to read. Good luck with your new endeavor! __________________ Lezly Harrison Laserdog Productions - Code that Doesn't Bite

#7 (permalink)   02-23-2010 rsavard New Member Company name: Savvy Executive Solutions   Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Riyadh, Saudi Arabia Posts: 11 Re: Construction Criticism Please! Thanks for the feedback! I added a quick line under the picture on the main page, and made the font size larger for the text areas on the rest of the pages. Hopefully this will make them easier to read. @Orgainzed Assistant: I cannot find any difference in the menu options... which browser are you using to view this page? Thanks again... looking forward to any other feedback! Rebecca

#8 (permalink)   02-24-2010 OrganizedAssistant Contributing Member Company name: Organized Assistant From the Desk of Janet Barclay: January 2012 in Review My latest Twitter: Overcoming Secret Blogging Fears: If I Give Away M...   Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Hamilton, Ontario, Canada Posts: 156 Blog Entries: 7 Re: Construction Criticism Please! I'm using Firefox, and on the "Retain" page the menu is all on one line and looks much better. On all other pages, "Contact" drops to a second line - it does the same in IE7 for all pages. I tried to upload a screenshot but that doesn't seem to be allowed. __________________ Janet Barclay, MVA, Organized Assistant Founder & Director, Golden Horseshoe Virtual Assistants Group

#9 (permalink)   02-24-2010 rsavard New Member Company name: Savvy Executive Solutions   Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Riyadh, Saudi Arabia Posts: 11 Re: Construction Criticism Please! I had a look on Firefox and saw exactly what you meant! Thanks ever so much for letting me know.... I use Safari, and it looked fine on there! I am hoping someone will check it out on IE and let me know if it is ok... Many, many thanks! Rebecca

#10 (permalink)   02-24-2010 dognose Active Member Company name: Laserdog Productions   Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Lafayette, CO Posts: 834 Re: Construction Criticism Please! Rebecca, the text is much easier to read, now. __________________ Lezly Harrison Laserdog Productions - Code that Doesn't Bite