Hi Everyone

My website has officially been changed to http://www.virtualnancysbusinesssupport.ca Please let me know what you think.

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Nancy Lynch
http://www.virtualnancysbusinesssuppo rt.ca

I like it! I definitely like how you have examples of the work you have done for previous clients. Very clean website!

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Shandon Collins, Senior Research Consultant & Owner
The Research Ace || http://www.theresearchace.com

I like the website; it is very informative. The only downside I feel is that it is very busy...a lot going on, on both sides. Good luck!

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Kimberly

Hi Nancy,

I like your website! Very clean and professional. Great job!

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Denyse Giguere
Cimarron Business Solutions

I like the site but I also agree with KimLake2. Specifically, I think there is too much information that doesn't necessarily need to be repeated on every single page. You mention your education on your about you page so what is different that it is on every other page as well. Your newsletter title is a good one, but on the button in this font, it's difficult to read (but I'm an ole lady and what do I know).

Went to you website and loved it! I especially liked that you put the video on. I too had trouble reading

Hi Nancy. I like your website. It is obvious you put a lot of thought into it. Your Summer of Success series is great.
I agree with KimLake2's comment that is appears to be a little busy. I wonder if you could move some of your home page items to the inside. For instance: the mentions of Deans Honor Roll and the certificate.

Your examples of your work speak well of your ability.

Mary

I lilked it. It was unique and I think it probably reflects your personality. Professional but fun at the same time.

Thank you everyone for your feedback. I have moved some of the links down the side (This was in my thoughts and it seems to have been a consensus). I also changed the button for my newsletter.

Always a work in progress, which I love.

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Nancy Lynch
http://www.virtualnancysbusinesssuppo rt.ca

Hi Nancy,

Great site and color scheme.

For your ad copy, toward the bottom, I would rewrite it to exclude the word I. Most marketing experts agree that your ad copy should be less about you and more about what you can do for your client or it can come off like you're still trying to prove yourself.

I would also replace all the I's with your business name, such as..."Virtual Nancy Business Solutions provides..."

SO for example... instead of writing "I feel my skills and background would be a perfect fit for mortgage brokers, authors, motivational speakers.."

Maybe you can write something like..."Are you a mortgage broker, author......seeking to partner with a VA for your business success?"

"VNBC can help your new business create an online presence with our web design support services..."

The "I to you" information came from a book I read called "Duct Tape Marketing". The idea was to show the potential client how much you understand their business needs. So the idea is to make it all about them, and give less of your credentials.

Ever notice how the best of the best companies spend less of their site space giving their credentials and trying to prove themselves? Your ability to simply understand their needs and put into words, says "I'm an expert".

This advice has helped me tremendously in landing clients.

Good job on your site and I hope this info can help.

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