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Old 07-27-2009
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Please review my press release!! This has been quite a challenge since writing is not a natural talent for me.

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FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE

Contact Information:
Website: www.ebusnessonlinesupport.com

Businesses now have a unique cost savings solution!

INDIANAPOLIS, IN July 27, 2009 With the launch of eBusinessOnlineSupport by consultant, Janet Falkenberg, small businesses, entrepreneurs, and professionals now have an exciting new solution to the rising cost of doing business. How is that done? By hiring a virtual assistant!!

By partnering with a Virtual Assistant, a business owner will have time to focus on tasks that will generate revenue and growth. This approach allows the business owner to work from their strengths, outsourcing the tasks they don’t have time to do nor do effectively.

Another advantage to business owners is being able to hire the skills of trained professional only when needed. They pay only for the time spend on the project, no expenses for an employee or temporary worker.

Janet Falkenberg, owner of eBusinessOnlineSupport, has over twenty years experience working with busy executives, attorneys and managers from small to mid-sized companies. “My clients will enjoy peace of mind and more balance in work and family life,” states Janet. “I am their partner in helping them be successful while still saving time and money.”

If you’re interested in finding out more, please visit www.ebusinessonlinesupport.com today or contact Janet directly at janet@ebusinessonlinesupport.c om.

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Hi Janet,

That looks good! There's a typo in this line

They pay only for the time spend (spent)

Maybe include a few examples of the work a virtual asistant does and then I'd say it would be good to go.

I'd then do a similar one, but with a local spin - Local business goes global (or similar) for submission to your local news.

Hope this helps!

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Hi Janet,

GREAT Press Release!

I would add or change (besides what Carol said):
Another advantage to business owners is being able to hire the skills of [a] trained professional - or leave out the [a] and use 'professionals'.

Maybe also where you have Virtual Assistant with capitalized first letters, also stay consistent and capitalize the other instance of this earlier?

Wonderful job! Who says you can't write?! Silly girl!
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Thank you for your eagle eyes and suggestions!! I took this one to Hubspot grader and lot a 75!!

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Well done! Keep us informed of how it goes!
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