Thank you, in advance for any comments or suggestions!! I have worked on this one for a long time!!

Janet


FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE

Website: www.ebusnessonlinesupport.com

Businesses benefit from outsourcing non-revenue producing tasks!

INDIANAPOLIS, IN July 17, 2009 With the launch of eBusinessOnlineSupport, small businesses, entrepreneurs, and professionals now have an exciting new solution to keep overhead costs low and still get the essential administrative services completed. How is that done? By hiring a virtual assistant!!

The virtual assistant industry is a new concept but is quickly growing as businesses realize the benefits. They work from their own fully equipped office communicating with clients via email, telephone, fax or the internet. Any business project can be done this way. Who needs to know that your assistant does not work in your office?

By partnering with a virtual assistant, you pay only for the time spend on your projects. “By doing those tasks that owners don’t like to do nor the expertise I provide a way for them to focus on their clients and revenue producing activities.” Janet continues, “I am their partner in helping them be successful while still saving time and money.”

About ebusinessonlinesupport
Launched just this year, eBusinessOnlineSupport provides a wide range of document creation, database management, sales & marketing support, meeting planning and more.

With many years experience in all aspects of business management and advanced knowledge of computers with a Microsoft Word Certification, Janet’s clients are able to enjoy the convenience of having the support of a skilled and experienced assistant only when needed. “My client will enjoy peace of mind and more balance in work and family life,” states Janet.

If you’re interested in finding out more, please visit www.ebusinessonlinesupport.com today or contact Janet directly at janet@ebusinessonlinesupport.c om

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Janet - Remember to keep your press release as business-like, newsworthy, and serious as possible. I'd suggest reading this OUT LOUD to yourself, and making corrections in the writing that you see as you do this.

You're close, but I'd say it needs just a little more work.

Must add that I'm uncomfortable with claiming that VAs do the non-revenue producing work. It's a negative way of stating things, that just doesn't sit quite right. In a good organization, all efforts contribute to revenue production. So could it be something more like
Businesses benefit from outsourcing administrative tasks
??
Or even '... routine tasks.'

Sorry if this seems over the top. You've got a great start here. Give it a little more, and you'll be glad you did.

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Mary H. Ruth/Virtual Writing & Communications
http://www.writingVA.com

Janet,

A good start. You need to check your quote. You didn't name yourself for the first quote. If I was reading this in the paper I would have no idea who Janet is.

Carol
CJ's Virtual Business Solutions

Ladies, Thank you for your suggestions and comments.

Janet