I have been sweating working on a press release for the last several days. I have read all the posts here on the forums. I have researched PRs in our local paper and all the google results on writing pr's. So I just came up with a headline. I need opinions as to whether I am at least on the right track.

"Local Virtual Assistant offers solution to Small Business economic woes"

Obviously, this is for our local newspaper. I worked hard to get to this point. I can't afford to hire someone to do this for me, so I am trying to do my best.
Any thoughts?

Diana

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Diana Buchanan
When You Don't Have the Time

I like this, Diana! I feel you are on the right track. Of course I haven't done a PR yet, but I really like what you have for your headline. It is something you can really build on for content.

Great job!

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Jules, SunRise Virtual Solutions - WordPress Customization & XHTML/CSS Web Sites

Diana, I think it is very catchy and the description is right on target. Good job!

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JoCarole
http://www.shoreofficeservices.com

Diana! Excellent! Love the headline and it's a perfect PR Headline! Great job!

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Kathya Kalinine
http://www.emeraldvirtual.com

Diana - Write it this way ...

Local Virtual Assistant Offers Solution to Small Business Economic Woes

... and it will be fine!

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Mary H. Ruth/Virtual Writing & Communications
http://www.writingVA.com