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#11 (permalink)   04-26-2009 virtual economy Contributing Member   Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 81 Re: Please review and critique!! I agree. I think this is well written. Awesome!

#12 (permalink)   04-26-2009 Robin Contributing Member Company name: The Doctor's Rx My latest Twitter: How is your brain feeling today? Mine is spent!...   Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Northern California Posts: 228 Blog Entries: 2 Re: Please review and critique!! Angie ~ this is very nice. Did you write it yourself or put it together from various resources regarding the industry? As mentioned already you could add information about yourself. This is a great starting point and you can use this with added information for various handouts, etc. Nice job! __________________ The Doctor's Rx "The Doctor's Prescription for Success"

#13 (permalink)   05-11-2009 virtualWebConcepts Contributing Member Company name: Virtual Web Concepts   Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Two Rivers, WI Posts: 53 Re: Please review and critique!! This is very well written, I wish I had good writing skills as you, great job! __________________ Kristin Kuzik www.virtualwebconcepts.com

#14 (permalink)   05-12-2009 ABusinessWoman Contributing Member Company name: Upscale Contract Management   Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 72 Re: Please review and critique!! Excellent! You hit this one out of the park. We just need a bit more info about your VA practice and it is ready to go!

#15 (permalink)   05-13-2009 DianaEnnen Junior Member Company name: Virtual Word Publishing My latest Twitter: DianaEnnen: @terrygreen3309 - Thanks so much for ...   Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Margate, Florida Posts: 265 Re: Please review and critique!! HI One other consideration would be to add in a call to action paragraph at the end. In press releases you are allowed to post your website. Good job! Diana Ennen Virtual Word Publishing www.virtualwordpublishing.com

#16 (permalink)   05-13-2009 JanineRaj Contributing Member Company name: Accurate VAs   Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 63 Re: Please review and critique!! Good Job Angie - Good Luck. Janine Raj.