Thanks for the suggestions everyone! I really appreciate it.
The apostrophe that you saw was actually a comma from the above "Our value". I just avoided it all together and made it a complete sentence.
I changed a few things and made it a PDF which you guys can see here:
Again, I appreciate the criticism and don't worry I always think of criticism as constructive (I definitely don't take it personal). It is all a learning experience and it's great to get input from others in order to get the best document out there that I can
I wish I could add some testimonials, however, I only have one client at the moment. I will be asking for a testimonial quite soon though!