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This is my first press release for my VA business. My plan is to send it to all of the small business owners that I know to introduce my services to them and hopefully get some of them as clients. I'm looking forward to everyone's suggestions!


SAVVE SUPPORT SOLUTIONS IS A SMALL BUSINESS OWNERS DREAM COME TRUE

UPPER MARLBORO, MD, JULY 8, 2012: One of the largest obstacles facing small business owners is a lack resources to complete many important tasks. In an effort to keep operating costs low, many opt to try to handle all of these tasks themselves or they just operate without them; this can be very costly. A virtual assistant is a low-cost and efficient solution to this problem.

SAVVE Support Solutions is a new virtual firm that launched in Maryland to fill this gap for small business owners. Shannon Baker, owner and operator, is qualified to provide numerous administrative tasks, event planning, and social media creation and management. “My goal is to provide creative, efficient and affordable solutions to help reduce the stress levels of my clients so they can focus on growing their business.”

Shannon has over 15 years of administrative and office management experience that you can utilize to help you take your business to the next level. For a detailed list of services SAVVE Support Solutions provides, please visit the blog at http://savvesupportsolutions.com/services/.
For a free consultation and for information on the affordable retainer packages available, contact Shannon at 240-245-0291 or at SAVVE_Solutions@verizon.net.
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Old 07-09-2012
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You need an "of" after lack in first sentence, comma after efficient in the second paragraph, otherwise it sounds good.
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Thanks for the proofread and review!
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Shannon,

I think your press release is very clean and informational. Did you mean to reference your webpage as a blog? I understand that the webpage may still be a work in progress but I think technically that is what it is, and it certainly lists the services that you reference in your press release.

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You are correct Vivian that the link goes to my blog; I haven't set up my website yet.
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