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Old 02-22-2010
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Hi everyone! I need some help on my tag-line, my failing English is getting to me!

Should it be:

Your partner to achieving business success
Your partner in achieving business success
Your partner with achieving business success
Your partner to achieve business success

This is quite embarrassing to ask but I really want an opinion on this. Thanks!!
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I think this one:
Your partner in achieving business success
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Old 02-22-2010
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I like
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Your partner in achieving business success
Not very keen on the to achieving, in achieving sounds like more of a partnership.
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Of these I would use: Your partner for achieving business success

How about: Forming Partnerships to Achieve Business Success

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Or would if be Forming Partnerships to Achieve Successful Business
I think I'm starting to confuse myself.
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No, it would be:
Forming Partnerships to Achieve Business Success

If you interchanged business and success it would be:
Forming Partnerships to Achieve a Successful Business

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I would use "Your Partner for Your Business Success"
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I like
Forming Partnerships to Achieve Business Success

I hope we are helping and not confusing you more!
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I'm actually very grateful of all your assistance! Thanks, Marta, Julia, Lee and Lisa!
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