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#1 (permalink)   05-24-2011 alcbiz Contributing Member Company name: ALC Office Services LLC My latest Twitter: alcoffice: I just joined LinkedIn and created my p...   Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Wichita KS Posts: 149 Tagline Help I think--I hope--I may have found it...The Tagline for my business! Here goes: The work you love, the time you deserve. __________________ A L Camien Manager Member

#2 (permalink)   05-28-2011 lrdurham New Member   Join Date: May 2011 Location: Lakeland, TN Posts: 27 Re: Tagline Help It sounds nice. What do you think of mine? Do What You Do Best... Let LRD Don The Rest! __________________ Lois Durham LRD Virtual Administrative Service

#3 (permalink)   05-30-2011 bbSquire Contributing Member Company name: Bookkeeping by Squire Latest blog: Un-prepared sickness. My latest Twitter: Yay know, I might have this. :P SOS: Help! My Cl...   Join Date: May 2010 Location: Scarborough, ON, CDA Posts: 91 Re: Tagline Help Hey. alcbiz : It's not bad. Sounds nice, good flow but it also sounds like you may be offering them work to do. I really like the 'time you deserve' part though. How about ... "So you can do the work you love, get the time you deserve and we handle the other things." Hmmm... sounds nice too, but may sound like you are promising too much. but it's an idea for you to run with. lrd : very nice. Kim.

#4 (permalink)   05-30-2011 debw241 Junior Member Company name: Deb's Professional Services   Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Las Vegas NV Posts: 422 Re: Tagline Help alc - sounds good but agree with Kim's comments and needs tweeking. Thought Kim's suggestion too long but good starting ground to combine yours and hers and delete from there. good LRD - just curious re Don (know meaning, but is there a double meaning i.e. is your name Don or perhaps have pic of Godfather in your logo?)

#5 (permalink)   05-30-2011 burneyvoa Junior Member Company name: An Office Extension, LLC Wendy B's Blog: Wendy B's blog My latest Twitter: Get the correct copy of that birth certificate. Ab...   Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Midwest, Ohio Posts: 306 Blog Entries: 1 Re: Tagline Help alcbiz. Show nice but I agree with Kim that it sounds like you are offering them work. How about "We do the work because you deserve the time". Just a suggestion... Wendy __________________ http://www.anofcextension.com Office support, Database Creation and Management, Internet Research

#6 (permalink)   06-05-2011 alcbiz Contributing Member Company name: ALC Office Services LLC My latest Twitter: alcoffice: I just joined LinkedIn and created my p...   Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Wichita KS Posts: 149 Re: Tagline Help Originally Posted by burneyvoa alcbiz. How about "We do the work because you deserve the time". Just a suggestion... Wendy Like it...but not sure it's complete enough. __________________ A L Camien Manager Member

#7 (permalink)   06-05-2011 alcbiz Contributing Member Company name: ALC Office Services LLC My latest Twitter: alcoffice: I just joined LinkedIn and created my p...   Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Wichita KS Posts: 149 Re: Tagline Help Originally Posted by lrdurham Do What You Do Best... Let LRD Don The Rest! I'm not sure I understand what the 2nd half is trying to say. __________________ A L Camien Manager Member

#8 (permalink)   06-05-2011 Tess Senior Member Company name: Codehead, LLP Latest blog post: SEO Q&A   Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 9,131 Blog Entries: 3 Re: Tagline Help I think lrdurham meant: Do What You Do Best... Let LRD Do The Rest! <--- I like it! alcbiz, I think you have a good start - though (for me) the tagline is just a bit hard to sort out relative to what it is I know you do. What about something like "Giving you time to do the work you love" or "Freeing you up to..." etc. It might help if we knew what your company name is. __________________ Create a welcome packet for new clients with this guide and free templates! (Available in PDF and Kindle versions)

#9 (permalink)   06-07-2011 lrdurham New Member   Join Date: May 2011 Location: Lakeland, TN Posts: 27 Re: Tagline Help Sorry... Its supposed to be: Do What You Do Best... Let LRD Do The Rest!

#10 (permalink)   06-07-2011 Leazell Contributing Member Company name: DEN Consulting My latest Twitter: VirtualBAnalyst: Hope some of you are going to the...   Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Paris, Ontario Canada Posts: 107 Re: Tagline Help alcbiz: The work you love, the time you deserve. Hi, How about: We grant the Service you Command - You get the Wish you Desire I was wondering how / where will you use the tagline? as a signature on your email? letterhead? etc?