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#1 (permalink)   01-27-2010 EliteAdministrativeServices New Member   Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Port St. Lucie, FL Posts: 45 Opinions Please on my tagline I have been racking my brain and have came up with three taglines but would like to get some opinions. My business name is Elite Administrative Services. Creating Businesses with Superior Administrative Services Growing Your Business with Superior Administrative Services Creating Superior Businesses with Superior Administrative Services Thanks Stephanie

#2 (permalink)   01-27-2010 Office Goddess Senior Member Company name: The Virtual Office Goddess, LLC   Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Boulder, CO Posts: 2,966 Re: Opinions Please on my tagline I would drop the 'creating' concept as you are NOT creating new business for your clients, you are SUPPORTING your clients. I would tend to go more in the lines of Assisting your business with Superior Administrative Services although, really, I'm not a big fan of that one, either... __________________ Lily Chambers, The Virtual Office Goddess, LLC Author "How to Do Your Own Small Business Bookkeeping"

#3 (permalink)   01-27-2010 dognose Active Member Company name: Laserdog Productions   Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Lafayette, CO Posts: 856 Re: Opinions Please on my tagline Hi Stephanie, First, I agree with Lily, that your taglines sound like you are creating/growing your clients biz. Just switch the words around a little & you can solve that. Superior Administrative Services for Your Growing Business. One other thing to keep in mind is do you plan to offer anything other than admin services? If you want to add bookkeeping or technical services at a later date, your tagline will not tell the whole story of what you do. Not that a tagline has to indicate what you do, but if you want to add more services, you might want to go more generic, like Superior Office Solutions for Your Growing Business. Good luck! Lezly

#4 (permalink)   01-27-2010 THVA Trish Contributing Member Company name: THVA (Trish Hallmark Virtual Assistant) My latest Twitter: THVA: RT @preciseselling: Want to start your own b...   Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: U.S.A. Posts: 94 Re: Opinions Please on my tagline ...and going off of Lezly's recommendation, how about "Superior Business Solutions..." which opens up support to the whole business and not just the office.??? __________________ Trish Hallmark www.thvaonline.com