I am late jumping in here but just wanted to tell you I love it and the font in the first gets my vote.

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Dawn Riley
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Thanks, Dawn!

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Tammi Metzler ~ The Write Associate
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Just wanted to add my two cents--I like #1. It seems to draw my attention and hold it with the colnsistency.

Debra Nail
Deb's Office

Hi Tammi!

I like number one, also. In addition to Tess's thoughts on the tag line, it may help to move it down just a hair to keep it from interrupting the flow of the swoosh. Also, there seems to be some room to push the tag line words closer together...then you could make the font bigger and it would be readable at a smaller size. Does the logo creator let you do that?

Great job, though!! It definitely says "movement" and "motion" to me...which is a great characteristic for VA's! It shows you're ready to get things done for your clients!

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Thanks, Deb! I appreciate your comments.

Brianna - Thanks for your input! It's great to hear from a graphic design pro such as yourself. I never thought about my logo conveying a message of movement, but I'm so glad it does!

I actually played around with the tagline a bit the other day and decided to make it two lines instead of one, to make it a bit more readable. I also implemented some of the other comments/suggestions from this thread. I'm pretty happy with the results (below), but I'd still welcome your thoughts.

Thanks again, everyone!

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Tammi Metzler ~ The Write Associate
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i like logo #1. the font used for your business name looks great but i'd use a different font for the tagline.

probably non-bold and more print-like.

also, a good idea is to create your logo with white and black backgrounds as well as with your chosen background color. your clients will want something to put on their websites to thank you for your help. =)

best wishes in your business.

Originally Posted by tamm7

Thanks, Deb! I appreciate your comments. Brianna - Thanks for your input! It's great to hear from a graphic design pro such as yourself. I never thought about my logo conveying a message of movement, but I'm so glad it does! I actually played around with the tagline a bit the other day and decided to make it two lines instead of one, to make it a bit more readable. I also implemented some of the other comments/suggestions from this thread. I'm pretty happy with the results (below), but I'd still welcome your thoughts. Thanks again, everyone!

Tam,

I like this last one with the light background better, but I did like the font in number two. If you do want the font to be pretty, I'd go with a plain font for the tag line, something that is sans serif and easier to read, that way when you shrink it it should still be readable. I'd also make the tag line font a little bit bigger. Also, when you save it, make sure you save it with a very high dpi (although I don't know how your logo creator program works specificially). If you save it with a higher dpi then when you shrink it and use it in printed materials it will come out clear and crisp.

It's really very pretty!

Y.

I like number 1 and 3. Very nice logo.

Thanks for the input, ladies!

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Tammi Metzler ~ The Write Associate
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I like #3 best - I like the slant of the typeface but I'm not sure about the readability of the tag line here. I like the readability of #1's tagline. #2 is good but I think that a serif typeface fits the graphic better.

Just my 2 cents :singer:

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