Elevator Speech, what floor are you on?
Posted 07-23-2009 at 12:25 AM by Bernice
This past Sunday, my husband and I were getting ready to attend a
summer festival so I threw a few business cards in my bag along with sunscreen, sunglasses and water. You never know when you’ll meet a potential client.
So off we go to the festival and within the first thirty minutes amid the crowds and noise I spy my husband chatting with a gal on a bike. As I move closer I see it is Karen (not her real name), an acquaintance of ours. I walk over and listen to the conversation; they are telling each other what they have been up to for the past few years. As they chat Karen turns to me and I get this feeling like a deer in the headlights, I have been thinking about my elevator speech but nothing comes out. I reach into my bag and pull out a business card which I hand to Karen.
Karen reads the card and says, “Oh you’re a virtual assistant, I could use a virtual assistant, what is it you like to do?”
Mouth open but nothing coming out, my dear husband tells Karen about a recent project I worked on. “Logistics” I mumble, “I worked on logistics.” Then I blurt out something about project work and web pages but it is weak and forgettable.
Number one place I went wrong, “prepare, prepare, prepare. It takes time and hard work to get to the point where your speech is concise, clear and comfortable yet relates just the right amount about your business and personality to set you apart.
I am no expert but that day I was in the basement when it comes to an elevator speech.
So off we go to the festival and within the first thirty minutes amid the crowds and noise I spy my husband chatting with a gal on a bike. As I move closer I see it is Karen (not her real name), an acquaintance of ours. I walk over and listen to the conversation; they are telling each other what they have been up to for the past few years. As they chat Karen turns to me and I get this feeling like a deer in the headlights, I have been thinking about my elevator speech but nothing comes out. I reach into my bag and pull out a business card which I hand to Karen.
Karen reads the card and says, “Oh you’re a virtual assistant, I could use a virtual assistant, what is it you like to do?”
Mouth open but nothing coming out, my dear husband tells Karen about a recent project I worked on. “Logistics” I mumble, “I worked on logistics.” Then I blurt out something about project work and web pages but it is weak and forgettable.
Number one place I went wrong, “prepare, prepare, prepare. It takes time and hard work to get to the point where your speech is concise, clear and comfortable yet relates just the right amount about your business and personality to set you apart.
I am no expert but that day I was in the basement when it comes to an elevator speech.
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Oh Bernice, your honest portrayal of being flustered was a great read. I feel for you! This is your opportunity to focus on and perfect that thirty second 'speech'. Have you given it any further thought since this experience?
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Posted 07-23-2009 at 11:32 PM by Tess
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The sad news is that this actually did happen but I am happy to say that I have started to "perfect" my speech and this forum had a thread that helped with some ideas.
Tess as a new blogger I am trying to write in a way that tells an honest story and I am glad that you thought so. So many things to do, so little time. |
Posted 07-24-2009 at 12:19 AM by Bernice
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Bernice, I'm really glad to hear you found some useful information here on the site to help get more clarify on your elevator speech. You'll be better prepared next time [and there is always a next time!
]You have a great way of relating a story via your blog - it may take a while to feel like you've 'found your voice' but staying true to what's natural and feels right for you as the 'storyteller' [even if you're writing a post about a professional resource or news item] is the best place to start and I'd say you have a pretty good handle on that ![]() I'm looking forward to reading more of your blog posts! |
Posted 07-27-2009 at 01:20 AM by Tess
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