Re: I am so "wordy!"
Haha, you're funny, Jules.
As a copywriter, may I suggest that when you're being too wordy, think about your writing as if you're the reader, not the writer. What do you want your reader to experience? Trust me, most people won't wade through lengthy text. What kind of text do you prefer to see when visiting other sites (like when you're looking for a product or service)?
You're capturing attention with your web pages, not explaining yourself. There's a big difference.
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