I agree with Lee, you may want to move your services to a separate page but link to your services from your homepage as well. Something like "take a look at my services for more information" with a link. You also might want to add some bullet points in your homepage and shorten some sentences. Also, I like the quote but you might want to move it from the dead center of your page to the sidebar and maybe even include a photo of you on the homepage. Also if you are part of Twitter and other social networking groups, place them in a more prominent position with the logo.
I hope this helped
Caroline
http://cpstyle.ca