Cortni,

What I liked the most about your website was the enthusiastic feel I got from it; through the design, the colors, the text, the photos, etc. I thought it well prepared with a nice positive design. I listened to your slide show at the bottom and I was very impressed with your voice and the enthusiasm you showed during the narration. You were very convincing and your words were professional and showed a little bit of your bright personality throughout. I don't think the slide show is finished though. I think it could be tweaked. I think people sit on the first slide too long while you talk and the 3rd slide narration seemed to cut your voice off. You show talent in creating presentations. So as time goes on, you may think about working on picking up the pace in the slides and add more original photos.

I was really impressed with your portfolio page and how well it was laid out. How did you get snapshots of your work on that page?

Overall, you've done a superb job. The video tells more about you and the services you provide, which I liked in the event someone doesn't want to site and read an entire home page.

Jan

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