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Old 01-12-2009
lprovo lprovo is offline
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Default Re: Finally.... Website up

Congratulations on getting your first website up and running! As you asked for feedback, here are a few things you might want to consider:

I like the colors. Very professional looking. The home page is a bit wordy. You may lose a viewer's interest by providing too much information in one place. Try dividing text up or paring it down. Check capitalization for consistency. Your slogan and many areas where you have bold headings uses mixed capitalization. Spell check EVERY page. I see a few punctuation errors, extra spaces here and there and sentence fragmentation. Maintain font consistency between pages. I am not a big fan of free website templates for several reasons. How will you include your URL on business cards, stationary, etc.? How will your website be marketed, submitted to search engines, etc.? Will your clients view you as professional if you use a freebie?

You have an excellent start and lots of good information. Hopefully the comments provided here will help you tweak the site a bit. Good luck.
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