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Old 11-16-2007
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Default Re: Website review Please
I would capitalize Assistant in both Administrative assistant, and Virtual assistant

I recommend using Tess' comparison chart instead of the VANA one as the clients can plug their own numbers...

If the mailing address is your home I suggest getting a PO Box - I doubt you want clients just "dropping by"


I have recently dabbled in a working knowledge of Peachtree Accounting, Microsoft Accounting, Power Accounting, MS Money, MS Access and Adobe Dreamweaver. , and

I am currently having a ball in the process of learning Microsoft Publisher and Adobe Photoshop. Combine these two paragraphs

I am quick to learn new programs so if you use something I’ve never tried, let me have a crack at it for a week or two. I would delete this paragraph altogether.

Re-order the site map to match the site.

I would change all references to "I" and "me" to "us" and "we."

Otherwise, looks great! I love the colors.
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