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Old 11-13-2007
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Default Re: Website Review (Text only!)
Originally Posted by OfficeButterfly View Post
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Welcome to Office Butterfly!
Office Butterfly is a part of the new generation of “Virtual Assistants”, where you can find top Administration Support;uh-huh - the semi-colon is used to put two complete sentences togetherin which I can assist you in whatever service you require.
Whether you are the manager of a department of a medium – or large-sized corporation do you REALLY want to work for the big guys?– or the Managing Director of a small business – and you are spending a vast amount of time on doing the Administration of your business, look no further – I am here to help.
If you are not a manager (i.e. a sole trader) then I can also assist you by taking care of your basic Administration tasks.

* I am able to provide professional support without all your excess business overheads expenses, for example office furniture and computer expensescosts. I work from my own home delete - makes you sound like a individual, not a business office, which means that any expenditure for my office comes out of my own pocket.

About
The Company
I created Office Butterfly in Autumn 2007, after noticing a gap in the local market where I felt I was unable to offer my skills to employers in the afternoons, as I also presently work part-time in the mornings. After an intensive investigation, I realised that I could work freelance – that way I was able to offer my skills as well as working at a time to suit me. Even though the company is based in Tonbridge, Kent, England, No, no, no!!working virtually means that I am able to work with companies from the local area as well as from No, no, no!!all around the world.

The Creator
I have had around delete 5 years experience in working in the Administration and Secretarial field; anddelete I now feel that I can use all of my knowledge that I have gathered from over the years into setting up and running her my own Virtual Administration business.
[*]6. What times do you operate? NO!!! You work on YOUR schedule, not theirs. Are you closed at certain times of the year?[*]At present, my current opening times are from 2.30pm to 6.30pm (GMT/BST) Monday to Friday; however I am very flexible and I will try my best to accommodate your needs and/or services outside of normal working hours. With regards to closure; Uh-huh!Office Butterfly is always closed on Christmas Day, 26th December and New Year’s Day.[/LIST]
I have outlined my suggestions in blue/red. Here is my biggest suggestion, however. Re-read the site from the standpoint of "this is a business, not a personal resume." I think you will find that a large amount of the text should be revised accordingly. You ARE a business, not a person. This means that your "home office" is just an off-site office from the clients rather than your house, you work around YOUR schedule, not theirs - and they don't need to know what that schedule is... I work on Goddess mornings, evenings, and weekends. But, my clients don't know that; they just know that the work gets done!

Hope this helps; don't shoot the messenger
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