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Old 11-12-2007
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Default Re: Web site reviews please
Looks like you've already rec'd some great suggestions and feedback.
The first thing I notice is the image of a sold house and the family in front of the 'sold' sign - but I want the first thing I notice to tell me who you are and what you do...with those images front and center, coupled with such a dark background, I really have to *want* to read to find out what service you offer.
Don't forget, people sum a site up in about seven seconds. You've got to get your message across immediately if you want to inspire them to click further into the site - so your home page should be absolutely clear as to what you do - I'd suggest making your company name and tagline (or at least 'Virtual Real Estate Assistant') the central focal point on your home page.

Good start!
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