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Old 08-20-2008
mw0263 mw0263 is offline
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Default Re: What do you think of my text for my postcard
BevukVa,

I think the post card is great; you will certainly capture a potential client's attention. I took a look at your website also and love it. However, I see a slight problem with one of the sentences (Would you like to reduce your business expenditure by only paying for the help you need it?) shouldn't it read (help you needed or when you need it?)? I'm from the US so maybe we have a different way of saying things here but double check before printing. Your thoughts are great and Robin Ann has some great input also.

Good luck and let us know the feedback from potential clients.

Margaret
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