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Old 08-19-2008
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Hi

I'm trying to get to the point without being too wordy
Am i getting the message across or at least enticing the potenial client

heres my text
Front side
Do you spend too much of your time on admin?

Would you like flexible support for your business that you can depend on?

Would you like to reduce your business expenditure by only paying for the help you need it?

Services we provide -Virtual PA - typing, diary & email management, client liaison, telephone answering to book keeping

Back Side
Virtual Assistance for Business

Imagine now, having your own personal assistant, there for you and your business. You can delegate tasks to us and have your own personal assistant wthout committing to the traditional cost.

We aim to make your life easier, and offer you complete flexibility in a way that helps you achieve the most out of your business.

Call us today for a telephone consultation to see how we can add value to your business.

End

I was thinking offering some sort of ie introductory offer ie 1 hr free with a minimum 2 hr booking - not entirely sure how to word it

Anyway I would be interested to know what you think

Thanks all
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