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Old 07-31-2008
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Hi Jen,

Great start on the site.

My first suggestion is to actually move your site to its own domain though; you can get a domain and hosting for only $10 a year. This is the first impression people will have of you and a very important asset to your business.

Choosing a domain name, what does jlh1976 stand for? this does not help people identify with your business. Your domain name should match your business name, hart virtual services.

I love the name and really like how the logo turned out. Why not incorporate the colors of the logo into the site. Instead of using beige use the pink from the logo.

Your tag line should fit on one line, try to male the font a little smaller so it fits. You may also want to consider having your logo go across the entire page width as the header and put your tag line beneath it. Just my opinion but I would like to see "heart of your business" using "hart" instead of "heart"

I like your about us page, why not add a personal photo to the site, this really helps people to connect with you.

You also need to add contact us page so people can contact you.

You are missing meta tags from your pages, this is important for SEO.

Overall good start, congrats on your new business venture and on taking action.

Please do not take offense or take this critique to personally, just a few things I have learned over the years and my opinion.

Kim :=)
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