I realized my short reply may give off the wrong impression, so I'm revising it.

Tess,

I really appreciate your advice. You have a true talent for critiquing. Its a big help to have an extra set of eyes with these things. I've looked at that site so many times, everything just runs together and sometimes things just make more sense in my head than it does when I put it in writing. LOL

I've tried asking friends and family for advice but they are not much help at all. I think it's better to get a 3rd party "unbiased" opinion.

Thanks again!

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Rebecka Melson ~ Virtual Business Services