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Old 09-25-2007
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Default Re: Opinion on Website/Blog
IMHO, I would take out the fact that you are not accepting clients at this time. Unless there is no way you could serivce the client, you wouldn't want to shut the door without at least repsonding to an inquiry...who knows, the potential client may not be ready either!

I love the color scheme, very nice!

"Work with us today and let our brillance assist you!"
*brillance should be brilliance
*"...assist you with building your business", and/or, "...assist you with increasing your productivity." Or something to that nature.
A VA is your right hand person helping you to succeed in your business.

"The irony is you may never meet your VA as odds are they live nowhere near you!”
I would soften that statement to something like, " While utilizing the latest technology we are able to seamlessly complete your project from a remote location." Or something like it...

Good luck!
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