Hi Terese,
I just took a quick look at your site and it looks good, but I agree with Darlene's suggestions about taking out the emphasis where you have all-capped words and removing the word
actually.
I like how your writing has a conversational tone to it that brings your personality out, but I would caution against becoming too casual. If you're targeting attorney's, remember how they would read this and what the overall effect of your writing style is and aim for that. I would also add more to your home page about how your services can save them time and money.
Terese, feel free to PM me if you'd like to talk about your site on a more personalized basis, I would certainly like to be able to help you out more if you'd like!
