Hi Terese,
I just looked at your site and think you are doing a good job. I read through the content and I think it is good so far. Here are some of my observations as far as content goes (I am not a writer, but an avid reader, so please take that into consideration
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Home Page
Orange (suggested changes)
Your Line:
Your Virtual Legal Assistant works
WITH solo attorneys and small firms to make work run smoother.
I wouldn't make the word "with" in all caps like that, if you want to stress that you work with solo attorneys rather than for (which I am assuming is what you want to get across)..perhaps the use of italics or different wording may be a better idea.
We’re human, we
actually like attorneys, and we’re pretty darn qualified too
Perhaps removing the word actually might make the sentence flow better. Also, you wouldn't be offering your services to attorneys if you didn't like them, right?
As far as your About page...my About page is very long too and I have to condense it, absolutely, so I have very little suggestions there
My only thought is to somehow get across that the bottom text are testimonials. Maybe you can use some sort of headline or break up the page with colors (another idea is to have a page specifically for testimonials). They need to pop rather than just looking like more text to read (and testimonials are text you
want people to read!).
That is it! You really are off to a great start. Your personality comes through in your content. Looking forward to seeing your final result.