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Old 09-16-2007
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Default Re: Review Request
Don't be nervous! I don't see a single typo, actually.
I'll note any suggestions and as with anything in this democratic, free internet community it's totally up to you to do what you like with them You can ignore me, too!

Just in terms of ranking in the search engine results - you'll want to use the word 'Virtual Assistant' everywhere in your site that you're now using 'VA' - or at least everywhere that you can wiithout being too redundant

Page titles - where they now say 'home' etc. they should say 'Virtual Business Services - Virtual Assistant' or something to that effect, at your preference - but use those keywords, a good set of viable keywords are already in your business name, take advantage of it!

I *love* that you have your smiling face on the 'about us' page - that is such a good move and adds an essential touch of personality to your website.

All in all I didn't see a single typo as I scanned your text, your pages are nicely formatted and the information is well presented...the only thing I would say is - you've got an incredible personality, it's the thing that makes you who you are and when clients contract with you they contract not *only* based on services offered, your experience, or rates, but based on how they feel about you as a person. I think it's always a good thing to let *more* of that come through in your business website with a bit more flair in the text, etc. Don't be afraid of erring on the side of casual - it won't happen - you've got a great professional foundation and glossing over the top with a bit more personality won't detract from that image at all. In fact, in my opinion it can only enhance it.

Your site is extremely professionally presented, which is superb - now in what ways can you make it a bit more *you*?

If you want, you can check out this conversation on this very topic
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