Hi Lily, for someone who hates marketing I'd say you have a good sense of the how-to
I agree with Agnes, the second one is fabulous.
One little suggestion: where you wrote
"to small and sole-proprietor businesses"
I might say "to small businesses and sole-proprietorships" or 'entrepreneurs' ?
It's superb, good job!
Just curious, what product/service will you use to print and post?