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Old 03-21-2010
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Default Re: Your opinion, please
Hi

I agree with Serita about cropping your picture, maybe even have a number of scenic pictures on a slow slide show.

Also noted nother couple of spelling errors in TERMS - freight spelt freigt and stationery spelt stationary. (assuming you mean office supplies and not kepping still)

Also I prefer the PRICES page layout with the bullet points rather than the table in the SERVICES page. The table look uneven and a little messy as not all rows are equally spaced.

You can still have the explanations for each bullet point
ADMINISTRATIVE-BOOKKEEPING

* Word Processing / Document Creation
Word processing is the creation, input, editing and production of documents and
texts using computer systems.

* Correspondence
Email, Faxing, Letters


You get the idea. Just a suggestion.

Cheers

Fiona


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