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Old 01-26-2010
Jean-VA Jean-VA is offline
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Join Date: May 2009
Location: Spring Hill, FL
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Default Please review my Draft Release
Okay, here it is. I don't like this, a combo of scary (putting myself out there) and feeling salesy.

Unfortunately it has to be done...so please help everyone. Feel free to critique and I would sincerely thank you.

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FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE

Company: Simplify and Delegate
Contact: Jean Kurniati
Phone: 1-888-744-4569
Web Site: www.admin-jean.com
E-mail: info@simplifyanddelegate.com

OUTSOURCE ADMINISTRATIVE ESSENTIALS TO YOUR LOCAL VIRTUAL ASSISTANT
Cost-Efficient Office Support Solution for Flexibility, Professionalism and High Quality of Work

Spring Hill, FL (January 2010) -- Outsourcing your administrative needs is a fresh approach to run your entrepreneurship without letting the business running you. Hiring a Virtual Assistant is a viable solution that allows business owners to get professional office supports they need in a cost-efficient manner.

Small businesses worldwide have reaped the benefits of utilizing the service of Virtual Assistants. Unlike the traditional way of getting help by providing employments, hiring an independent contractor means your costs only incurred when you utilize the service: Low when you’re slow, higher when you’re busier.

Simplify and Delegate is a newly launched Virtual Assistant practice in Hernando County, FL. They’re bringing into table a 10+ years experience and knowledge in administrative and secretarial fields, and looking forward into generating mutual success with all other small business owners and solo-entrepreneurs in the community.

As Simplify and Delegate Operator Ms. Kurniati stated, “How much is your time worth? Why did you go into business at the first place? Unless your business is about getting stuck behind the desk all day, or getting frustrated by your computer for hours, why don’t you let us handle the admin, while you are out there doing what you do best; running on your business, not in it.”

Outsourcing means there are no overhead expenses, no additional taxes, and no employer responsibilities. Delegating means entrepreneurs are buying back their time to focus on growing their businesses.

Simplify all your non-productive administrative tasks. Outsource, and start earning the real value of your time. Contact Jean Kurniati today at 1-888-744-4569.

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I actually worry it might sound more like an ad, but then I might just be a little paranoid since I'm not fond of this part of the business (selling).

Feedback are more than welcomed
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