
02-02-2008
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Company name: Codehead, LLP
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Portland, OR
Posts: 9,115
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Re: My Press Release - Help!
This is a really great start! Maybe just needs a bit of editing polish and you're all set  Here's my own quick scan [red is suggested deletes, orange is suggested additions, blue is notes - hopefully one of our professional editeurs  will pop in here with some tips!] :
Internet and Technology Pave the Way for Emerging Virtual {maybe add this for search engines and those who receive industry news via SS??} Industries
Hopatcong, New Jersey, February X, XXXX– Since its inception, the internet and information technology as a whole, has played a vital role in creating industries typically unheard of only 20 short years ago. Today, there are web designers, web developers, computer programmers and even professional bloggers. As technology grows, new industries will begin to emerge. In fact, due to today’s ever-changing technology, there is an one industry on the rise right now; it is Virtual Assistance.
Virtual Assistance began in the early 1990’s. You may often hear the terms Virtual Assistant or Remote Assistant utilized in the business world today. [I would try to tie these previous two sentences together - needs more flow] A Virtual Assistant is someone that provides administrative services out of their own office utilizing their own equipment to businesses that have a lot of work, but no time to do it! The tasks they can handle are oftentimes similar to that of an Administrative Assistant. However, Due to Virtual Assistants the many varied backgrounds in the virtual assistance industry, their available services can range from word processing to marketing to database creation and development. The possibilities are indeed endless.
D. Victoria Virtual Assistance, an up and coming Virtual Assistance practice located in Hopatcong, New Jersey, provides professional and friendly virtual assistance to small businesses, entrepreneurs, and non-profit organizations. “Being able to utilize today’s latest technologies in order to help our clients reach their goals, is truly rewarding.” Says Darlene Gonzalez, Owner and Operator of D. Victoria Virtual Assistance. As technology grows, Virtual Assistants will be able to offer many more services then they do today! [I might suggest taking this out, it implies that not all necessary or required tasks can be done *now* b/c of technology]
For additional information on about D. Victoria Virtual Assistance contact Darlene Victoria at [email - phone number] or visit www.dvictoriaonline.com.
ABOUT D. Victoria Virtual Assistance - With over 10 years of administrative office experience, D. Victoria offers a multitude of virtual assistance services including database creation and management, word processing, proofreading, desktop publishing and more.
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