Re: New at Websites
Hi Pam,
Your site looks really good. I have a few suggestions:
1) On the Welcome page, in the sentence "With today's economy and “Fly-in / Fly-out” (FIFO) staffing practices are furthering the demand that can only be met by competent VA’s." Should there be a comma between "staffing" and "practices?"
2) In your Mission Statement, I would change "their" in second line to "our" so that it's all in first person.
I hope that's helpful.
Cheers,
Gina
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